I think it sounded okay, but it's as if though you're reading the script that was presented to and not being natural enough with the Vegeta voice. And not trying to sound like a mean person, though it's hard to do the original Vegeta (Drummond and Sabat), though you probably need to go a bit more natural voice, just from hearing the voice, it's like you're voicing with your head tilted down or something. Just an opinion.
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